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Ted Unangst-6
Rewrite some of the page to avoid second person.


Index: leave.1
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RCS file: /home/cvs/src/usr.bin/leave/leave.1,v
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -p -r1.16 leave.1
--- leave.1 13 Jul 2018 16:59:46 -0000 1.16
+++ leave.1 22 Jan 2020 02:08:00 -0000
@@ -35,17 +35,17 @@
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm leave
-.Nd remind you when you have to leave
+.Nd print reminders when it is time to leave
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Nm leave
 .Op Oo Cm + Oc Ns Ar hhmm
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 .Nm leave
-waits until the specified time, then reminds you that you
-have to leave.
-You are reminded 5 minutes and 1 minute before the actual
+waits until the specified time, then prints a reminder
+that it is time to leave.
+Reminders are printed 5 minutes and 1 minute before the actual
 time, at the time, and every minute thereafter.
-When you log off,
+If the login session ends,
 .Nm leave
 exits just before it would have
 printed the next message.
@@ -72,8 +72,7 @@ from the current time.
 .Pp
 If no argument is given,
 .Nm leave
-prompts with "When do you
-have to leave?".
+prompts with "When do you have to leave?".
 A reply of newline causes
 .Nm leave
 to exit,